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abducted Jack

by Anton Emelin

Final Rating: 5.92. Finished #23 out of 162 entries.

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Animator

Anton Emelin

Experience

i gruduated Animation Mentor in this year.

Time Taken

two weeks

Description

Jack is the tough criminal guy. He was stolen by other gang of bandits. He is tied to the metal pipe. and he is talking with leader of the gang

Comments

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Per Cardell

I don't get the idea, but I like the animation. Good stuff!

Vanessa Gonzalez

The lip sync feels a little simple, like you could've animated the lip's pronunciation more but other than that, the animation in general is great, especially his expressions.

Aaron Clement

Lip sync is a bit floaty. Nice ending.

Eshan

From "expression" onwards, it becomes nice! Before that, lipsync doesnt match up. I like the way you did ".. you are better off not knowing"... great animation!
Should be top 5

Amartya Mukherji

very nice...
action is slightly on the slower side for the dialogue may be...
But i felt the lip-sync could have been better for sure.

Danny Kneip

Strong emotion in the face, but the sync is slightly off - a pity because this has some real potential. I can sense the threat in this guys expressions. I think the emphasis on the first "you're" around F126 might have been better utilized on "better", but overall it's a good attempt.

Richard Clark

Nice!

Svetlana

You made him very believable acting, i was tremble by myself in the first "you're" moment. Great! Wish to see his lips more sharp and clear.

Casey Colledge

The lip sync is a little off but, i really like the character.