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Talk to my gun

by Jacky Chen

Final Rating: 4.03. Finished #111 out of 162 entries.

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Animator

Jacky Chen

Experience

5 yeas

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Ninja sneaks into the Japanese palace to find some goody. Unfortunately, he got busted by security. The worse thing is ... he did get some goody from security......

Comments

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Mike M.

Poor selection for voice and animation - it does not match.

Beau Hall

It looked good, but the words never seemed like they were coming from the guy - hard to explain; something was missing.

Ryan D Lowe

Try not to include an acting moment with each and every beat, the animation can look crowded and complicated, and possibly over worked. I like the keep alive on the ninja though, fingers espeically!

Aaron Clement

A bit floaty. Good staging.

Jez

yes I was always wondering what those martial arts guys could do against firearms (wink) ... quite an animation you created here,

Jasmine Moody

I really don't think the first couple of seconds of the ninja were necessary?? I like the ninja's expression and reaction to the booger flick... which is a very interesting acting choice... ?...

Liviu Boar

lil bit overacted

Richard Clark

Picking the nose?...really?

Danny Kneip

Maybe just a little bit over the top? The lip sync is so-so and the hand gestures are well animated, but quite annoying.