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Let sleeping dogs lie
by skramy
My first time participating in the competition. It gave me motivation to keep working, and I had fun.
Comments
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Ryan D Lowe
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!
James Van Dam
Make sure everything is out of stepped animation and splined. Also remember fallow though and overlapping action.
Amartya Mukherji
There is a lot of scope for improvement. Try to figure out the timing after you visualize the acting you want to do, then start animating a shot. Shooting your own video reference would help you a lot.
Danny Kneip
Keep trying!
Aaron Clement
A bit poppy and linear. I don't get the smile at the end.