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Explain

by Sujoy Roy

Final Rating: 4.61. Finished #79 out of 162 entries.

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Animator

Sujoy Roy

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

2 days

Description

A man explaining some guy..

Comments

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[user]

he moves a lot. give him some breaks! :)

Benjamin Berg

Nice animation here! The problem with it though is that the energy of the character is much higher than the energy of the voice.

Caleb Rankin

I think that your animation is pretty good, I'd just tone down the movement a bit. It seems a little over active for the dialogue... but otherwise, good job!

Aaron Clement

A bit bland.

Ryan D Lowe

Good thought process, but I feel there are a couple acting beats that aren't needed. Solid DECENT!

Richard Clark

Looks like your were struggling with figuring out what he should do behind the desk. I think next time you should film yourself doing mundane things that a person would do... like typing, filing papers, using a calculator, getting off the phone, etc.