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Explain
by Sujoy Roy
A man explaining some guy..
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[user]
he moves a lot. give him some breaks! :)
Benjamin Berg
Nice animation here! The problem with it though is that the energy of the character is much higher than the energy of the voice.
Caleb Rankin
I think that your animation is pretty good, I'd just tone down the movement a bit. It seems a little over active for the dialogue... but otherwise, good job!
Aaron Clement
A bit bland.
Ryan D Lowe
Good thought process, but I feel there are a couple acting beats that aren't needed. Solid DECENT!
Richard Clark
Looks like your were struggling with figuring out what he should do behind the desk. I think next time you should film yourself doing mundane things that a person would do... like typing, filing papers, using a calculator, getting off the phone, etc.





