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Sam Pipes 08/14 Contest Entry
by Sam Pipes
Description
Ran with the seaside ambient noise and the weary tone of the speaker
Comments
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Per Cardell
Tighten it up and you have a good piece in progress!
Ryan D Lowe
Nice facial work, the movement is too floaty however and needs tied down in areas.
Aaron Clement
A bit vanilla. Lip sync needs work. Also needs more overlap... moving holds, etc. I like the idea.
Richard Clark
Too floaty...work on timing.





