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Erin King
Fantastic acting in this piece! My one critique is that some of the mouth shapes are not quite right, particularly on "expression."
Vanessa Gonzalez
I like the overall animation but the lip sync needs improvement. When he says "expression" he opens his mouth wide twice when he could be opening it only once on the "pre" of "exPREssion".
Per Cardell
Not bad!
Blond
nice lighting i guess
Aaron Clement
Expression feels off. Love the ending. Good moody lighting!
Amartya Mukherji
Nice ... There is scope for improvement. timing .. work on the timing. Very nice try though
Ranvir Singh
Very nice animation done...His left hand very uncomfortable... holding that glass...When he says "expression"...lipsing prob is there...
Ryan D Lowe
Floaty movements are the biggest opportunity here! Tie those down! Great finger work at the end though!
Robert Holmen
the hand flip is late.
Richard Clark
the left hand seems to be swimming around the glass without any definitive contact. Lip sync needs improving. It pops in certain areas. Lip sync on "expression" doesn't match up.
Casey Colledge
This is really nice subtle acting. The only part of the lip sync I would work on is the word expression. It looks a bit off to me. Also, I would like to see some kind of pose change with the characters left hand. But otherwise really well done.
Colin Davey
The mouth work on "the expression" feels off. Otherwise the lip synch is well done.