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The Expression!!
In this scene teacher is teaching his student about a moral expression.
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Vanessa Gonzalez
I liked it! My one critique is to work on the lip sync a bit more, around frames 178-210 at the end of "dogs" his mouth closes completely and they should probably stay open at least a little.
Per Cardell
Pretty good animation but the cutting and the framing need some more work.
Muhammad Arsal
nice
Xabier Olaz Moratinos
Very good animation but be careful the hand goes trough the chair and the end is very important
Abhishek Banerjee
great work....Kartik da
Jim P
You changed scenes so much you were obviously telling a story, but i can't figure it out.
Ryan D Lowe
Watch that blink on such a tight shot. Break up those lids! Great work here! Great acting!
Aaron Clement
Lip sync is off... acting is ok, though... good use of camera angles.
Richard Clark
I would position that camera better at 114 so that we can see more of his expressions. I would completely get rid of the chair in front of the guy on the last shot. It gets in the way of his hand swipe from 299-303. It also looks like the hand swipe is too abrupt and it could be because of the chair. Lip sync could improve as well. It's mainly on, it just needs more refining.
Danny Kneip
The kid's reaction starting at F217 is priceless! Really great bit of animating. The lip sync is pretty solid, as are the performances. A pity about F301. There's so much to really like about this animation - no doubt it will do well, and you should be proud of your entry!