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The Godfather
by Gero M
Godfather talks with one of his guy who made a mistake...
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Per Cardell
You had me up to frame 500. The final rage is a bit unexpected and disturbing to me.
Chrissy Schneider
animation great , lip sinc a little off
Blond
lol the end surprised me
Jacky Chen
love the slash one.....
Sam Baker
Nice rendering, but the lip sync isn't working, and the action is too boring.
Jez
WOW ... what a build up .... a good story & acting
Amartya Mukherji
ha ha .. funny. :) Actions are too floaty. There is a lot of scope for improvement.
mithun
. i like this animation.. char posing are good
.Timing and expression, char attitude are very nice.
.. looking very attractive
Liviu Boar
this would ve been awesome had the lips matched the audio
Abhishek Banerjee
great acting
Matt Horstman
The eating and slap were well done. Lip sync could use some work. Some sounds not matching up with his mouth shape.
PRIYA RANJAN DEB
slap specialist. ha! ha!
Em Harrenstein
Not sure why that camera movement was necessary? Also don't get why he slapped the guy at the end.
Jim P
Best eating animation I ever saw. You could have had the liquid rustle after the hit, perhaps the table could have bumped a little. great though
Ryan D Lowe
Crazy piece, but great acting. I believe it. I think the intro/camera move doesn't work though.
Aaron Clement
Long pause at the beginning. I don't get the slap... what's it for?
RAHUL SHARMA
animation wise there is space.....like when he is hitting him he should make his body little forward this i felt..around frame 335 his expression should not be changed like this........same at frame 400................overall making every one laugh.refreshing animation
Richard Clark
You don't need that camera move at the beginning. The right leg hits an abrupt stop at 452. And him slapping the guy...that's harsh dude.
Eshan
seems slow here and there but i loled at the end :D
Svetlana
Brilliant character's play. But it seems for me that your villain is not so cruel, for his face remains almost kind during all the clip, especially his eyes. Super great chewing!
Andréanne Milette
Really nice! The disgust expression is nicely captured at the start when he take a bite. But I feel like you could have accentuate it on the word lie. He kinda look emphatic at that moment and the character doesn't feel like he could have empathy.
Danny Kneip
If you just edit this down to the audio clip, the animation is not that great because the lip sync is weak. Everything outside of the audio clip is actually quite good, bordering on great. Seems the lip sync was overlooked - a real pity.
nabil
the Best one is this month ... you got full stars