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You don't want to know

by Patrick Bricarell

Final Rating: 5.21. Finished #49 out of 162 entries.

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Experience

Taking classes

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Caught carrying out a coffin, he cautions his roommate that he doesn't need to know!

Comments

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[user]

great stuff! :)
you could change his pulling-pose at the end, because it's exactly the same like frome the beginning (like a default pose).

Aaron Clement

Love the idea. Great ending!

Abhishek Banerjee

good work

Richard Clark

That gyrating movement that the guy on the couch does from 21-32 is strange. It looks unnatural or too animated to be believable. I would try something else there. There are moments where the coffin guy's motion hits a wall. I would finesse those areas.

Ryan D Lowe

Love the texture/timing across here. Solid work!

Amrithraj

Nice job ..But you can add more movement to the character siting... then it will be more attractive.

Amartya Mukherji

:D interesting