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Sleeping dogs
by Mike Mushi
Cartoonish
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Lwaxana
This surreal-type style is really great! I'm not sure if you would use this style for the larger story, or only for certain sequences, but I think it would work well to bring in the psychology of the person being spoken to, perhaps other characters in the scenario are keeping things from them because of their mental/emotional state. Or it would also work well as a dream. Really nice!
Per Cardell
Arty!
Ryan D Lowe
Interesting, and great use of the face.
Blond
something special here
Aaron Clement
Very good. Not sure why he stops talking at the end. Otherwise, good!
Jez
like plasticity of your animation... one of the kind so far ... nice lines too.
Sai Srikanth Charepalli
Woah!! Awesome!! I liked the way you took advantage of his facial morphing.Good job!!
Casey Colledge
I like the style of animation. Just wish it was more than a floating head.
Jasmine Moody
Fffwoah surreal
Matt Horstman
Really interesting stretching going on with his eyes
Amartya Mukherji
what was that..??? LOL
nice flow ..
Thomas Edward
Nice! Quite abstract movement, very unusual - looks good!
Colin Davey
The blur frame around 158-160 isn't really working properly. It comes and goes too quickly and the face doesn't change position enough so it ends up looking like something unintentional just sort of flashed on the screen for a second. You could try adding some frames at the start and end partially blurred to ease in and out of the motion, or you could lengthen the distance between where the face starts and ends up.