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Don't disturb the dog

by David Rubio Colomer

Final Rating: 6.53. Finished #8 out of 162 entries.

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Experience

3 ½ years

Time Taken

two weeks

Description

A nanny dog is disturbed while sleeping...

Comments

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Per Cardell

Charming. A bit snappy here and there but also some good stuff. Include more of the dog than the head and the neck and it will sky rocket!

Vanessa Gonzalez

Really like the idea!

Ryan D Lowe

Great spin on this! Fantastic work with such simple movement. LOVE the eye work for the though process. "expression" is a hard mouth shape to hit. you nailed it! LOVE the "your..." pose. Good stuff! Love it. I'm sure this will do very well. Well done!

mithun

very nice

Jasmine Moody

YES! Finally dog animation :D I was going to do the same thing for this competition but ran out of time. Lovely work. Good lip sync and acting.

Matt Horstman

You get extra stars for the double take at the end.

Aaron Clement

Love the snappy timing. Good acting, too.

Amartya Mukherji

ha ha ha very funny.. :D
good use of the dialogue.. too good animation.
you could have added slight breathing or very subtle movements in the body which is very stiff now.

top ten for sure. :)

Richard Clark

Haha...love this one!

Chad Bailey

Great concept! I wish I had come up with something as creative as this! Love the emphasis you put on the head for "off". It would be great to see a bit of drift down on the head, as he comes out of "lie",,, That would add perfect touch of keep alive & ease out. Great work!

Andréanne Milette

Great work! I really love the way you emphasized the words lie and better with the head movement.

Danny Kneip

Really love this bit of animation. The lip sync is solid and the zipping of his eyes back and forth around the last line are really great! Among my favorite entries.