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Per Cardell
Clever to use the white of the door to clarify whats in her hand.
Marcel Junges
haha nice! he's looking at tv while talks to her, but turning his head on her direction... so natural! congrats
Jez
a surprising ending .... great...however something lucking in his animation... i got that feeling...but still like it
Amartya Mukherji
seems funny.. but story was not clear. nice animation though
Ryan D Lowe
The head nod should start a bit later then it does. Good work! SOLID DECENT
Aaron Clement
Nice, lip sync is a little off.
Danny Kneip
Great silhouette of the whip - a strong choice, as well as a decent pose of the woman, though the shifting of her weight seems a little strange. She never really has to take her eyes off of him. There's a continuity error with his finger on the beer bottle (F195-196), but the cut is nice. The sync is decent.
Richard Clark
Love the poses! Great attitude. Great staging too! Lip sync is a bit off at certain moments and it needs a little more refining.