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Redneck in a Bar

by revolt_randy

Final Rating: 3.40. Finished #136 out of 162 entries.

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Animator

revolt_randy

Experience

newbie

Time Taken

2 weejs off and on...

Description

A redneck in a bar, chatting away....

Comments

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Ryan D Lowe

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement

Good staging. I like the idea. Lipsync is a bit off. A little jerky at times... needs cushion, arcs, etc. Has potential.

Amartya Mukherji

Needs a lot of improvement