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visit a prisoner
by Yue Yuan
A killman visit a prisoner him friend.
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pluto
nice....for frames 108... it might be good to drag head downwards with a blink, then overshoot and settle
Liviu Boar
I liked it, it seemed just a lil bit over-acted, and the lip sync could've been better
Vanessa Gonzalez
Pretty good animation, I'd work on the lip sync a bit more, though.
Ryan D Lowe
Texture is good, but the motion is incredibly mushy. Not sure if that was the intention but arcs/limbs are breaking throughout the follow through. Lip sync needs another good pass.
Aaron Clement
Nice ending.
Amartya Mukherji
wow.. that has got some punch in it... Superb animation. how well you have synced each and every dialogue hits with your acting and smooth curves is a treat to watch.
Only complain might be, - energy and pace of your animation sometimes exceeds the audio pace. But that gets overshadowed buy the superb acting.
Danny Kneip
He says "You're better off not knowing" and then gives him a picture to look at. I'm lost on the concept, and I completely missed the "sliding of the envelope" across the table upon first viewing. I love the expression at F176, but the B in "better" is completely lost on the lean in, and F198 is a strange "F" sound. The sync, overall, needs quite a bit of polishing, and some of the gestures and movements seem extremely forced and rushed - (his left hand goes from his chin to the table top in only 4 frames). There's much to like here, but it's a bit of an untamed animation at the moment.
Bedango Ghosh
nice.





