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If Only She Knew
by Caleb Rankin
I've been animating for about a year as a student
I worked on this all month
Two Friends have found themselves discussing their relationship wondering where they are at. She is hopeful and he wants it to stay a friendship.
Comments
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Vanessa Gonzalez
I think the lip sync could use a little work. His lips move a little too fast like he's trying to pronounce each syllable. You should probably make his lips flow a little more like in the "ssion" in the word "expression" and from the "ow" to the "i" in "knowing".
Ryan D Lowe
Subtle. Which works really well! The lip sync is very chatty though! Tone down that jaw!
Aaron Clement
Nice staging. Lip sync needs work. Pacing feels great, though.
Amartya Mukherji
Liked the concept and staging. I felt acting could have been a bit more matured.
Liviu Boar
too bad about the lip sync...
Robert Holmen
His mouth animation is very poppy. Too many motions.
Richard Clark
Needs more change in posture. They seem to stay in the same pose throughout.
Danny Kneip
Good atmosphere, nicely paired with the audio. The sync is pretty good. Her reaction in the middle of the dialogue is very readable and well done, but I feel they should not have looked away at the same time at the end.