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Prevention
A guy with a gun tells someone to not be looking for trouble with him because he could regret it.
Comments
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pluto
use some hand movement
James Van Dam
Could use a bit more secondary action. Like in the fingers or the one foot. Heck one the "your better off not knowing" part he could brandish the gun a bit. I honestly didn't see the gun on the first play though.
Aaron Clement
Nice pose and staging. Maybe more of a moving hold at the start. Lipsync is a bit off at the end... qudos for not overdoing this.
Caleb Rankin
I really like your animation of the upper body and face! Not moving the legs at all is a little distracting. I'd move them ever so slightly to keep them from looking like they are frozen .
Richard Clark
I like it but I would have like to see more body movement in your piece. Right now he stays in the same major pose throughout.
Ryan D Lowe
This is good work. I really wanted to see a pose with the gun/body. A quick "point out" moment on the inflection of the piece. overall too static. Lip sync is nice. Just needs another pass. And the jaw control needs scaled back quite a bit. Too wide on a lot of shapes. Good work!
Amartya Mukherji
nice.. fine tune the lip sync
Danny Kneip
Nothing subtle about the lip sync here! Every syllable is an open mouth.. I think it's over-animated, and the hands and fingers under-animated (fingers on the left hand never move!)