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When wife's on holiday

by Sgrasa

Final Rating: 5.62. Finished #32 out of 162 entries.

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Animator

Sgrasa

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

1 week

Description

Wife's calls home to know how her son's doing...

Comments

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Per Cardell

Apart from the ik-hand resting on the furniture and the unneed extra duration at the end - I like this. The animation is pretty good and I recognize the unpleasant situation he is in. Good work.

Yue Yuan

Good Job ,and I want your model.... haha~~please!please!please!
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Jez

Like it an idea & animation, however; what's up with a kid ? I've got the message ... a phone call again, I'm placing myself on "do not call list" ...lol

Aaron Clement

Didn't get the ending. Good lead up, tho.

mithun

expresison are nice

srinivasarao

ok....

Amartya Mukherji

nice concept and animation..

Vanessa Gonzalez

I really like the his expressions! And the lip sync is one of the best I've seen out of like the 100 I went through.

Richard Clark

Great body movement on the guy. Make sure you address the arm pops around 118-140. Try and work on the elbow not popping in and out of the movement. Frame 235; the movement hits a wall. I would try something else with the movement of the kid. That "jump turn" movement is not very interesting. Again, the guy's body movement hits a wall at 353

Ryan D Lowe

This is over exaggerated but I love it! Love the flow/arcs this goes through. Good stuff!

J.K. Riki

The final cut was a bit jarring, but otherwise I like the concept! It may have gone on a little too long at the end, you didn't need all that extra stuff to get the story across.

Casey Colledge

I really like this one. Especially the first part. I am not really in love with the last two facial expressions. I would rather have seen a more frustrated look followed by a deep breath and close his eyes and shake his head. (or something along those lines) Right now it just doesn't seem to fit situation. Unless, I am misunderstanding the story. Great job though!

Danny Kneip

Nice bit of lip syncing and character animating!