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Let sleeping dogs lie
by Fredrik
Trying to stop guy from writing stuff he will regret.
Comments
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Per Cardell
The performance is not supporting the idea behind this piece. It is unclear. Keep working and have fun!
Vanessa Gonzalez
The animation overall is pretty good but for the future, try making the guy talking pop out a little more because the lighting made me focus a little too much on the guy typing. I know it's not exactly about the animation, but if you want the audience to actually focus on the guy talking, then also watch out for the aesthetic choices you make.
Chrissy Schneider
would be good if the guy with the dialogue could shut the computer down
Benjamin Berg
I don't understand the story you are trying to tell. As for the animation, it feels too slow from pose to pose. Also the hands need a lot of work.
Amartya Mukherji
Nice ... There is scope for improvement.
your break down poses needs to be refined to create more arc.
timing needs to be improved.
Then work on the EXPRESSIONS AND detailed ACTING :)
Ryan D Lowe
A bit of texture here would go a long way. A good pass on timing/texture would help give it more life!
Aaron Clement
Not sure about this hands overing at the beginning. I liked the rest.
Thomas Edward
Great idea and great execution! Nice one!
Danny Kneip
The speaker squats, then squats some more and then squats some more! I wish he was able to lean forward instead of continuing to squat closer and closer to the ground. The lip sync is pretty good, overall.