3Danimation

Per Cardell

Good. You put something together. This is just the beginning of your animation journey. Keep'em coming!

Ryan D Lowe

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Aaron Clement

A bit linear and back and forth. Nice staging. Love the moody lighting.

Stas Bolotine

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Dhruvil

Too floatyyyyy

Amrithraj

You have to hold in your poses Strongly.The is poses you

did is Good but its not at all registering in eyes.Any way good

effort.

Dean Mosier

There's too much movement going on and his actions don't seem normal.

Babul Prasad

too much unnecessary movements