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Divorce Lawyer
by Dui Oray
an untimely visit to the hospital to read his client's letter
Comments
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Lia Rothschild
Needs some broader gestures!
Pauline Champetier
Some nice touches in the hand gestures ! However in my opinion he doesn't look very in the middle of a thinking process, he seems to be reading the article and saying a line written on it.
Gayle Yeier
I love her subtle actions in relation to his. Both characters are activated. I feel like there could be some more upper body movement with the ups and downs in the actors voice. Otherwise this is nicely animated, and nice staging.
Hailee Pullman
Great acting and animation.
Carolyn Mennecke
Have the man look at the woman more often - it looks like he's reading a manuscript instead of emphasizing the article Jimmy found. Also, the woman doesn't look understanding when she says "I understand." Have the expression match the dialogue!