11 Second Club August Entry

Nathan Younger

great planting on the main character movement

Dalton Krajewski

The weight of the character when he sits on the desk feels very realistic and believable. Well done on that! The walk was also exceptionally well executed. I feel like some of the character's movements could have more of an "arc" to them, and I think the female character could benefit from a few more subtle movements and moving holds, but overall this is an excellent piece!

Harishankar Thiyagarajan

What I like is: Lipsync is good. Some poses are good

What could be changed: Acting, Body movements such as head, spine and hip. Hip needs to worked more when walking and sitting in the awkward position.