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Pauline Champetier

I think you're loosing a bit the viewer with so many cuts not justified by the story. In a movie, every shot has its own meaning, and something happening in the frame triggers each cut.

Steven GUardado

too blocky.

Dalton Krajewski

The poses were very expressive and the tempo was varied nicely, but the transitions seem a bit poppy and the mouth doesn't match up to the dialog very well. Having some more extreme mouth poses and synchronizing it to the dialog a bit more carefully would help immensely.

Carolyn Mennecke

This is jerky, the poses make no sense, and the camera angles are confusing

Matthew W. Nuttall

To much random movement that does not fit in with the dialog.

imran younas butt

need work on facial expression
need also poses