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I understand

by Ben jemaa med mehdi

Final Rating: 2.76. Finished #119 out of 138 entries.

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Experience

2 months

Time Taken

4 Days

Description

My final work

Comments

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Dalton Krajewski

The motions seem to happen much too quickly and they end rather abruptly. I think separating your extreme poses a bit would help as well as maybe cutting out some motions so there's more room to play with the timing. The poses themselves seemed well done, though I think the characters' spines could be adjusted so the poses have more of an overall direction. Nicely done, though! :)