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emotional handicap
Description
a Psychiatrist telling his desperate patient that wont help any more
Comments
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Dalton Krajewski
I think the staging would benefit from having the camera zoom in closer to the characters' faces. I think the biggest flaw is that the male character seems very rigid and upright throughout the entire piece. Pushing his pose into more of a C curve and inverting it in certain poses would allow for much more emotive expression. Overall this is a very nice entry :)