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"Enabling"

by Mike Park

Final Rating: 4.11. Finished #63 out of 138 entries.

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Animator

Mike Park

Experience

2 to 2.5 years give or take.

Time Taken

A good amount of hours each day for a week.

Description

The new intern Jamie has constantly been suggesting topics to write in the daily web article and it's causing this individual to vent on another poor intern.

Comments

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Harishankar Thiyagarajan

It started good. The poses are fine and then the action went jumping. Character doesn't have to move continuously. It looks like you have to work that on the graph. You have to show the action separately. Body

Melissa

When he says "i realize at that point " , what he is doing with his body needs some work (it doesnt look reel )

Carolyn Mennecke

He moves a bit far and fast for "let me finish, okay?" Also, have him focus on one or two areas (off-screen person, computer, etc.) instead of all over the place

imran younas butt

start was good..but in the middle of the animation ..little jerks
need adjustment

Nikolas Diamant

The second shoulder shrug didn't work for me