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At the Park
by Julian Tan
Two friends meet at a park to talk, but the one of them has trouble opening up to him.
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Dalton Krajewski
The poses were excellent and they were paced in a good rhythm, but I feel like they hold for a bit too long in places and have transitions that are too linear, like when Malcolm is pounding his hand into his fist. The rhythm is there, but he seems to "hang" in place in a few places.
Harishankar Thiyagarajan
The girl looks slow and fine. But the guys is sloppy. Focus more time on the poses next time, it will help you a lot.
behrouz
i liked the body acting
Carolyn Mennecke
The motion is too linear, and his finger shouldn't be bent backwards. But good choices for posing!
Steven GUardado
the camera movement is very distracting.
Nikolas Diamant
The sky looks out of place in the scene, but decent animation