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Arfff teenagers
by loic
Description
Hi!!
Comments
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Pauline Champetier
Fixing the eye contact at the beginning of the scene would improve it a lot ! But nice work overall.
Steven GUardado
lip sync is off in the second shot and the focus character seems to be overacting the dialogue.
Hailee Pullman
Great poses and I love the contrast between the characters and the background.
Carolyn Mennecke
Love the emotion in this one!
Alexander Gray
superb work! the pose where he lifts his foot up and stomps down could be more pushed. The acting is great and the emotion is well shown in the scene.