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Nag, nag, nag!

by Tai Beaumont

Final Rating: 5.71. Finished #12 out of 138 entries.

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Animator

Tai Beaumont

Experience

not enough

Time Taken

too long

Description

A father nags at his teenage daughter.

Comments

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Nathan Younger

monster inc like!!!

Harishankar Thiyagarajan

What I like is: The whole acting. Its great. I love it.
The concept: Aliens having a conversation about "Article from Yahoo health" "lol" outside earth in the house which is not on the land. You used the sound pretty good when he knocks the article papers on the desk.

What could be changed: some poses with fingers and body

Tyson Haeh

lip sync is really lacking

Léo Miche

Nice animation! I think that the character at the foreground move too much and distract our attention from the main character. An other thing you can maybe improve is the timing of her reaction : I thinks it's too early after (and even a bit before) "Enabling". Let her the time to react. But anyway, good work!

Carolyn Mennecke

The shadows on the wall are distracting