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A day at work.
A school project. its my first time entering the competition.
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Nathan Younger
i love the pause of fear!
Dalton Krajewski
I think the cuts were very well placed! The biggest issue I see is that the movements of the characters seem really quick and poppy. The mouth especially needs to have a few of its poses slurred together so that its extreme poses aren't so close together, and the other motions I feel just need some smoothing between them, which may involve removing a few less-vital keyframes. The staging was very good though and a lot of the poses seemed nice and expressive.
Steven GUardado
nice intensity on the main character! I suggest you push the poses a little more; they seem a bit stiff.
Diana Kosianka
There are some strong poses in this video, but I see plenty of jagged edges not just on the characters, but also on the backgrounds and props. I think it could be better if they were smoothed out a bit more.