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Emotional handicap
a conversation between a stoic father and an emotionally unstable daughter.
Comments
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Pauline Champetier
Nice job overall, I like the way you set the scene. I wish you had worked more with the facial expressions, the man's eyebrows seem a bit stuck. Try to stay eleven sec frowning, if you act it out you'll see that you have a lot more possibilities.
Amartya Mukherji
very nice... keep it up.
Loved the way Morphius pulls the fridge door talking to Mary. Nice timing. For me that's the USP of your shot. Best of luck
Richard Bond
With such a close shot, your male character could have done with a bit more acting in the face.
Also, I'm assuming (based on eyelines) that these characters are facing eachother? With the shots being so close and there being no establishing shot, it is a little unclear where they are in relation to eachother unfortunately :/