« Back to August 2015 Competition
Something Wrong
by serdar cotuk
Nothing to do for her.
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Pauline Champetier
I understand what you tried to do with the kind of clunky acting in the end, but I feel like it's a bit awkward - and it becomes entertaining because it's awkward but not for the sake of the story. Make sure to match the tone of the soundtrack - unless you do it all along, as some sort of parody.
Steven GUardado
It was off to a good start, then the staggering of the character from left to right totally ruined the scene.
Nathan Younger
weird, but it is a style! good job
Carolyn Mennecke
It started off really well, but the moving back and forth is unnecessary - and I don't understand why the woman has a beard
Jhonsonbill
I love it.Your idea is the best :)