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The Shopper
by Robyn Myers
A father has a serious financial discussion with his daughter outside of a shopping mall. Aside from simplified background and props, looking for some solid animation feedback! Enjoy!
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Manuel
The man's movements are interesting but he seems to jump from pose to pose with barely any smooth transition. The woman has poor lipsynching and moves too much at the end, the camera also jerks too much when it's going to reveal her bags.
Nathan Younger
great movement
Dalton Krajewski
The lip-syncing was superb! The mouth poses were very varied and emotive and the synchronization was right on the money. Some of the actions though seem like they need a bit of work. The poses don't seem to flow from one to another, rather they just shift without much direction or fluidity. Overall this is very well done though!
Harishankar Thiyagarajan
Decent work. You have to very careful when animating Blake character as the head is too tall and arms are too skinny. They should look good.
Hailee Pullman
Needs some fine tuning, it feels really loose as is but I can see where you are headed with it! Great job!