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jimmy the printer

by Morcel

Final Rating: 3.70. Finished #81 out of 138 entries.

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Animator

Morcel

Experience

(----------------------) this big

Time Taken

3 days

Description

And i hope you enjoyed

Comments

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Dalton Krajewski

I love the poses, but I think it's the transitions between them that need a bit of work. Some of the timing seemed a bit fast and instead of having the character completely freeze, some moving holds could be utilized to make things feel much more organic, but it's a very nice animation overall! :)

Eric Raffle

too extreme on your jaw drops too many popping on the speech

Harishankar Thiyagarajan

Decent Work - Your poses are good, can be improved. But the actions needs more improvements. If you refine this same animation with more time, it would look great. Make sure the object don't overlap (left fingers to the moniter - Frame 67).

imran younas butt

need work on hands and also work on relax the curves

Steven GUardado

your posing beats are too even.