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magic needs emotion

by Gabriela Delarosa

Final Rating: 2.48. Finished #128 out of 138 entries.

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Experience

less than 2 years

Time Taken

days

Description

the sorcerer can't help his apperentice to learn magic any further because she's not ready emotionally

Comments

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Manuel

There seems to be no gravity affecting the movements, yes I know he's floating but he feels more weightless than he should, also, the camera is avoiding his face during most of his dialogue.