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meeting
by ozgur guler
Unofficial meeting in the official meeting room. It's all about enabling.
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ozgur guler
This is super awesome :) but i'm noticing some mistakes now.
but this was a quick work.
Anyway, this is still super awesome :)
Dalton Krajewski
A lot of the actions seemed to have very consistent pacing, which allowed them to be very smoothly transitioned between each other, but spacing the keyframes apart at less regular intervals would really help the rhythm of the piece as a whole. Good work! :)
Carolyn Mennecke
The concept is great, but the hands are leading too much of the pose. Use more subtle motion and utilize the facial expressions. Also, decide on one or two simple emotions that the character is feeling and work on that - not the instantaneous switch from angry to indifferent!
Steven GUardado
hands are too floaty, you need to adjust the timing in the graph editor. Also, think composition.