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At a bar
The bartender is tired of this girl drinking her problems away.
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Manuel
The lipsynching is pretty solid and the shoulders move fine but the rest of the movements are too understated to take note. The cup seems to hover rather than slide
Nathan Younger
the characters eyes need to follow the secondary character but great staging/ rendering
Dalton Krajewski
The animation had a nice tempo and the motions were very fluid, but I think a lot of the actions were very understated for how emotive the dialog is. That's my only complaint. Other than that nit-picky detail, this looks wonderful!
imran younas butt
no facial experssion
need more acting...means guesture
VanG
More head movement would have been better. It's very static almost
Diana Kosianka
The whole set-up in this video is well-done. It's very ironic that the bartender tells the patron he "cannot support her emotional handicap", and yet he's still serving her alcohol. The backgrounds and character animations are very good, and the timing on the lines is fantastic as well.





