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Theater Audition
by Luisa Torres
A woman is auditioning for a play, in this a man with a hen takes the stage and begins to question which came first whether the chicken or the egg, the woman is confused and angry about this situation. asi sale en ingles
Comments
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Justin H
The movement feels a bit floaty and unnatural in regard to the male character's arms.
predrag lazic
The character would benefit with Shakespearean body language; cool idea.
Cloud Wilk
He is way too stiff in his walk. Also, his face is a little too frozen during his talk- particularly in the eyes.
Richard Carrillo Barrios
An advice, have a little more time rendering (I see that's a playblast), it wont change the animation but can enhance it, also the last shot is too low mesh.. why?
Sabrina Winkel
Everything looks messed up on this animation. Believe me I've been there. You're not alone. I submitted my first animation a few months ago and it looked bad. It had issues haha but don't worry we will both get better ;)
Kevin Cooper
Keep the camera still instead of moving it. Having it float around while your character is talking is very distracting. The walk at the beginning does not look natural. In your future work, try to cut out things that do not add to your piece
Ankit Singh
Camera noot cool & Animation is lacling, improve it