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Husbands
Description
Is a daily scene in the life of many couple.
The current scene is in the step blocking.
Comments
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Jean Lamy
Work on your walk for the lady. She's walking too quickly. Not bad blocking. Just wish you could've finished it.
Matthew Remer
Try to finish this, great concept
Sabrina Winkel
Boring. Flat out boring. You need to get them to talk, the story made no sense, too much movement... Wait, not enough movement! You didn't have a story