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Demanding Princess
by Paul Von
Description
After a failure to entertain the princess.. the two performers face her wrath!
Comments
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Yev Rotar
Practice the animation principles.
Chris Rodriguez
Poses need to hit way more. Really floaty, try next time to get stronger poses.
JarvisQiu
good ideas
Cloud Wilk
The shots are all over the place- I'd recommend toning down on the amount of camera being utilized and focus more on the action being conveyed.
Marcus Taylor
I'd suggest not entering interlaced footage as it makes it a little harder to see. Also, maybe try less characters so you can spend more time on their movements.
Sabrina Winkel
Made no sense