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A Chicken.
by Pablo Torres
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Justin H
This needs more movement. Aside from the lip syncing, the characters don't really move in any compelling ways. I didn't even notice the paw movements @200-245 at first viewing. It just needs... more.
Jean Lamy
Judging by this animation, I think it's a bit too early to jump into creature animation. There is some fundamentals lacking.
Paul Von
Framing is not good. Also way too many camera changes for such a short clip. It becomes confusing. The female voice part cannot be seen with any mouth movement. Finally the last shot is interesting... but what is going on?
Cloud Wilk
Unfortunately, the rig you used has been known for being pretty testy to work with.
Marcus Taylor
Try to keep to the '180 degree rule' so it doesn't confuse as to which character is speaking.
Richard Carrillo Barrios
You got a staging problem there, the male wolf starts speaking and he's on the right side of the screen and suddenly swaps position with the other wolf and now he's on the left side, that's a bit confusing to the eye. You can change the angle but try not to change his position with the other wolf.
Sabrina Winkel
Well. I like the animal idea