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Paranormal Girl
by Manojkumar.M
A cute girl is changing herself as a ghost and she is trying to be a normal person. But after came back from the ghost character she Cannot be a normal girl. So, she became a Paranormal Activity Girl. Have some fun.
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Yev Rotar
Good story. The acting needs more work.
Justin H
I not sure what just happened.
Moy Parra
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Paul Von
THis is confusing. Try to make it more obvious why you chose the poses and what is going on. Items in the scene can give clues too. One idea is to have 'Mery' pull off the wig and become bald, then slip it back on at the end. Just a thought.
Cloud Wilk
The twitching and switch between characters is just awkward. There's moments where the acting starts to work, but it really needs refinement.
predrag lazic
The glitch stuff is interesting. Maybe a bit more violence with the knife at the end.
Sabrina Winkel
That was... Bad. First off,M the characters completely disappear when they're not talking but also there's no story and bad camera movement, but I know your struggle