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chicken fight

by juan francisco leon

Final Rating: 3.63. Finished #66 out of 100 entries.

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Experience

2

Time Taken

28 hours

Description

a practice for fight and pp shot, its not a big one but it helps me a lot for learn.

Comments

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Justin H

I like the expression in the eyes and brows from 88 to 180. The movement of the bodies however for the first 3/4 of it seems a little too "floaty" for my taste though.

Chris Rodriguez

definitely different....

predrag lazic

Stylistically valid.

Cloud Wilk

I'm very confused about what that first shot has to do with where the clip ends up.

Marcus Taylor

Your render and quick camera moves makes it a little harder to see the character's movements.

William Harrison

The story behind the scene is kind of confusing. I dont really understand why they are fighting in the beginning and what it has to do with the dialogue.

Sabrina Winkel

Creepy!!!