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That stupid game!
After hours and hours of been playing... the results weren't that good...
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Santiago Colombo
I like the room design and clothes. You need to review his lips sync
Chris Rodriguez
Really liking the setup here. Just needs more work on splining. There is a bit too much blocky movement here and not enough tertiary animation. good piece nonetheless
Jean Lamy
I really like the girl's movement. Nice and smooth
Matt B.
I like the way you animated the girl throughout, while the male seems a bit robotic at times. Perhaps a bit more relaxed in arm/hand gestures with follow-thru.
Jerrold Chong Yuan Pei
Great acting on the girl! really like her expression of the dialogue, facial expression was also spot on. Especially her final reaction. The guy needs a bit of work.
Sabrina Winkel
Camera needs work. Lip sync needs work. (You're not alone) try YouTube because you can get some really great ideas on how to Create stuff! That's what I do! I'm only 8 months experienced
Sumedh Dharmadhikari
The start was dramatic and cool but then i guess you missed on some good poses later on.
Kevin
I really like the bonnie's animation, but I think when malcolm begin to talk, it left one strong pose.. Still a good job !
Ankit Singh
Camera Animation noot Cood . Don't slide slowly Camera. Why we are sliding camera just bcoz of we want to show his expression but here we have to show actting