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10 meter Diving
by Wang Yong
A guy don't want to make a diving from 10 meter platform
Comments
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Justin H
Really cool variety of speed and motion. The expressions were compelling and timed well except maybe for 241 the woman's expression doesn't budge at all when she exclaims.
Yev Rotar
You have some really nice movements. You should work more on acting. For example, when he grabs her, she should experience a moment of surprise.
Danny Kneip
Good poses and acting. The lip sync would benefit from much more polishing, as would the hands.
Richard Carrillo Barrios
1st shot, They are on a jumping platform: He's on the left, she's on the right.
2nd shot, he's on the right and she on the left, and now we don't see the platform anymore.
Result, I don't know where they are or where they are walking to. I got it on a few more views but that's not the idea. GJ anyways.
koujikun89
I can't really relate much with your interpretation of the story and the dialogue. Maybe you want to share about it.
Sabrina Winkel
First off, there's too much movement going on. Try having the character that's talking move more than the character that's not so that we know which one to focus on and it gives it life and makes it look more realistic. Think of how you move in every day life. If you were to have a conversation with someone, you were talking, you'd move more than the character that's listening. See what I mean?