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by Yev Rotar

Final Rating: 3.36. Finished #79 out of 100 entries.

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Animator

Yev Rotar

Experience

1.5 years

Time Taken

1 week

Description

I am trying to get better. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Comments

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Paul Von

love her facial expressions

Karl Bernhardt

I like the facials on the girl, but needs more body acting. Also don't hide the guy's face and think we won't notice you're trying to cop out of lip sync ;) In future if you don't want to do two characters just have one and have them react to what the other's saying. I've seen some top 10's where the main character has only 1 small line of dialog

William Harrison

Can't see the mans face. Wrong camera I assume?

Sabrina Winkel

The camera cuts his head off. Haha lol