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Suit
by Daniel Fiske
Description
Just made him act
Comments
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Kevin McCullough
Feels very pose to pose, and try to avoid twinning in the arms
Lea
Why turn him fully away from camera on the most impactful part of the audio? You could've had him turn slightly but so his face was still visible, or alternatively exaggerated his body language much more as he turns away.