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11 seconds club entry

by Me

Final Rating: 2.57. Finished #111 out of 120 entries.

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Animator

Me

Experience

I'm just a student and still learning

Time Taken

1 month

Description

student entry

Comments

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Taylor Cole

Needs more holds and body movement.

Aaron Hopwood

The lip sync is pretty good in my opinion and some of the larger motions looked pretty nice. I would say that the actions, particularly with the hands and head could use a little more urgency to them.

Amrithraj

Animation is floating...stick on the basic principles

Ruben Uggla

It's pretty good although a problem I have with the animation is that the character seems to always be moving to a pose at the same slow speed. Maybe some pauses and a change of speed would improve this.

Marques Matthews

The animation feels too 'floaty'

[user]

This needs some work on poses.