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Kill that rival
by 刘伟
The wife has an affair, two people both are killed.
Comments
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Ioana Cocis
A bit exagerated but great job!
wahler Judith
Good technic, but too much poses I think , so your rythm lacks efficiency and we don't have the time to read some of your good poses :), especially at the end.
Kevin McCullough
Too many poses, overacted
Brenda Casillas R
Looks good a lot of snappy movements but he also looks like he is moving a lot without having a purpose to be doing so. He is dancing plus telling a story and suddenly jumping. I think you can connect every movement better. I like how he is talking to the corpse, but I don;t get why he is touching his foot in "immigrant", maybe in the "bottom" could be a better option.