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Poet's Lament

by TJ Askew

Final Rating: 4.42. Finished #54 out of 120 entries.

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Animator

TJ Askew

Experience

1 year amateur, none professional

Time Taken

Close to 50 hours

Description

A poet laments about his greatest regret.

Comments

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Ian Schneider

This has some great good posing and you can really feel the emotion from the character. One thing that stands out to me at the moment is it there are some spots that need to be cleaned up a bit, for example around frame 93 it feels like he is hitting a bit of a wall. I personally would prefer cleaning these areas in the graph editor.

Hope this helps and keep up the good work!

Hacho

Emotion here is real strong. Great job!

Brian W.

Really good acting.