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Dashing Knight
by Ben Hall
A knight on a flying dragon doesn't quite understand why he's being complimented.
Comments
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Michael Snyder
There needs to be a lot of work on the animation of the dragon. The way he is flying is really awkward.
Jonathan Padilla
The dragon is flying weirdly, and it seems like the timing of each flap is a bit off? Maybe concentrate a bit more on the flying animation and look at some references to get the timing down.
The connection between the dragon and human seems a bit off as well. The human usually has a state of balance or trying to balance, he flows along with the dragon movement, try to make the movements not so harsh. Relax the model a bit?
Overall the concept isn't bad however it can use some working on.
Alan Leppen
If the scene is taking place in a sky, try to put some cloud backgrounds by using Photoshop.